peer feedback

this peer feed back is from the film opening because of them.
Genre: Crime/Drugs 
What elements of this sequence did you feel were successful? Give at least 2 elements. and explain why they were successful.

• I feel like the edit was good where they used black and white to show the time difference.
• I also like the back ground and set because it goes very well with the certain shots and the actual plot line.

Were there any aspects of the sequence which you felt were confusing/distracting/missing, etc? Be sure to explain your answers. 

• I felt like in the sequence there was a lot of dialogue missing as there was no speech just music.
• for some of the titles they are the same colour as the background but as it is black and white for the back in time parts the colour blends and you can barely read the title.

List 2 things which you feel you would have improved this sequence and explain your opinion. 

• I would have included dialogue to expand on the story.
• I would have made sure that they sopherjets was a key word as some people at the start may not know what the film was about.